• frongt@lemmy.zip
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        17 hours ago

        Not words, punctuation and composition. Your comment is difficult to read.

        • hector@lemmy.today
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          15 hours ago

          Well keep working at it, it’s a lot harder to read when you get older and we’re all very proud of you that you are still trying to learn!

          • rhythmisaprancer@piefed.social
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            15 hours ago

            Your first sentence needs work. This is what they are talking about. We get that English may not be your first language, and that’s OK, but that sentence is pretty bad and isn’t conveying a coherent message.

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              14 hours ago

              The types of errors and the commenter’s reaction to correction would suggest that this is a native speaker who missed a good deal of primary and may or may not be high.

      • Whostosay@sh.itjust.works
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        19 hours ago

        You are missing words in your post and it is hard to read because of it.

        Rereading what I wrote, I can see that I probably came off like an asshole, not my intention.

        You’ve got missing parts